Assignment
22A- Elevator Pitch No. 3
From my past pitch, I listened to the feedback I
received and tried to keep the good parts like inflection and tempo the same
and incorporate things I could improve on. For example, this time around I
worked on memorizing my pitch more effectively so that I don’t break eye
contact with the hypothetical audience at any point. From the feedback I
received, I understood that this eye contact helps with a clear delivery and
makes the audience feel like you’re venture seriously. People are more likely
to appreciate a speech that has been memorized, rather than having to watch
someone reading something off a paper. I also tried to include more specific
qualities of my business concept and why it is important to purchase. By
highlighting the dangers of the internet, I also hope I was more convincing
this time around. Lastly, I tried to improve on my energy and hand gestures to
go hand in hand with what I’m saying.
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